Contest: write-a-songtext WINNERS
Ismail entered the piece
I wish he hadn't died and hits
first place! There's a lot I like about this. Firstly the subject: a funeral isn't a usual subject for a song, but for me it worked brilliantly. The sorrow and pain which 'should' accompany being at a funeral, it's all translated from emotion to words very accurately. Another very strong point of this song is the lack of repeat. Only the line, "I went to a wake the other day" keeps returning but what the main character witnesses at the wake is different every time. The verses are equally lengthened, which is good as it helps to maintain coherency. The rythm is a subject to a lot of diversity at times which makes it harder again to maintain coherency but that's not very much of a problem... it's a very good song indeed. Congratulations! I'll be activating your three months subscription soon

Aleid entered the piece
Some love isn't enough and hits a respectable second place. The funny thing is it's quite different from ~
LurbeFlummel's entry: there's a lot of repeats (whereas
I wish he hadn't died has very few) and the subject is immensely cliché (while
I wish he hadn't died stands out for originality); it's not necessarily a bad thing though. This is a very "easy" song (or at least it is for me), easy to give a 'musical frame', easy to listen, but because of this it could get boring after listening to it a few times.
(One small part I'd like to highlight in this songtext: "Though I just can't stop/loving you is insecure", makes brilliant use of a single phrase "loving you" while actually meaning 'Though I just can't stop loving you, loving you is insecure'. Very well done.)
The rest
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Korgone entered the piece
mr. Nobody. It's one very unique and interesting song (or as he puts it himself, "more like a musical piece") but the rythm is incoherent and the piece is quite chaotic, overall. It's refreshing and particularly original but the lack of consistency is too much of a bad thing in my opinion.
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Alannavich entered the piece
Good Time Memories, arguably the best poem I received from contesting members. The main reason why this piece is not first place is simple: it's not enough of a song. So despite the fact it's a very good poem, I can't relate it to any rythm or any tune. Also there's no real song outline (for example verse 1 - chorus - verse 2 - bridge - chorus) which is almost a necessity for any song. The subject is fine, the writing is very good, but a song... no.
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BrandendBoomschors's entry
Superskunk is exactly the opposite from Alanna's entry in terms of both quality of writing and songishness (no I didn't make that up

). Looking at the writing, it's simple - not to say boring - and quite short. Looking at the consistency of rythm and rhyming pattern, it's very good: one can immediately relate the words to a rythm. However, another worse point of this entry is the subject: for those who don't know, superskunk is a popular word for weed. Like pointed out in the contest description, all facets of a songtext - including the subject - are important.
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Wesselus entered the piece
A song about you which is not only his first song but also his first ever piece here on dA. There are some issues concerning English and rythm, but for example the choice of words is very good for such an inexperienced writer. So, talented? Definitely. (I'm thinking it runs in the family.) Experienced? Not so much. Keep practicing!
I actually very much enjoyed running this contest. It was small-scale but it was a succes, at least in my book: though there weren't very many contestants, the entries were *very* diverse and indeed quite equally leveled. It was very hard for me to decide the winner. I'd love to hear what you, the contestants, thought and think about it
help me with any feedback on how to improve future contest runs! I'll love you for it!- - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - -
Me & my highly interesting life
Birthday
As some of you might know it's my
birthday today! Yesterday night was Spring Ball, which lasted till after 12 so I actually turned 19 in a city theatre with over 1500 people in it. (I think they weren't ALL there for me...) It was pretty cool, some (not-so-funny) friends of mine starting singing "happy birthday" during a music break hoping to have everybody sing along; luckily for me, they failed

Today my parents and little brothers came over to my place to congratulate and bring some gifts (well, only one actually

). I think I did a pretty good job cleaning my room: seeing as they didn't faint from the smell. I'm off cleaning up again after I post this (that's the downside of inviting people: they make a mess, then go home) but that's okay, I'm actually starting to like cleaning. Probably from doing it so often.
Anything else.., I'm quite happy I'll be gone from my current job in four weeks, the people are nice but the work is *so* boring. I have a chat with my soon-to-be employer next friday during which she'll explain what my task(s) will be there. If it sounds as bad as my current job, I'm gonna go look for another. I might seem a little overreacting but what I got now really sucks, I spend time doing schoolwork or on dA because there's just so little for me to do, then they get mad at me for not doing anything. Well...
Music
I was planning to have a new piece of recording equipment up today but I changed my mind (happens a lot, yes). I've been playing my acoustic a lot lately and I think it sounds a lot better than the semi-acoustic, especially when playing classical pieces. I fitted new strings as well last week, which of course improved sound a lot. So, once again: re-recording, but still using a mic. I *might* get the USB hub I was talking about (with which I'd be able to connect my semi-acoustic with my laptop directly, cancelling the background static I get from microphone recording) but definitely not anytime soon. I still think the recordings will be better, plus recording is fun. I'll get edits of my current pieces
Andante,
Cantilene Espagno and
Romance very soon, maybe tonight even, and make proper deviations out of them; I think the new strings deserve it. I'll upload two pieces of my own the two sundays after today, after that I'm not yet sure. Maybe I'll have more pieces of my own, maybe I'll record some existing songs; we'll have to see.
Stuff
First and foremost, can I please have your attention for my friend Tjerk ( ~
krijt ), who's currently in hospital recovering from a heavy medical operation. As far as I know the operation itself went as planned, his family and girlfriend are with him, but if you've spent time in hospital yourself you know it's never nice to be there. So, if you have some love to spare, send it

or be a little more concrete, go to his page and leave a nice message for him to read as soon as he returns home. Thanks

Right now I'm quickly getting intoxicated with chocolate (I love Easter) so I'll be off before I start saying weird things... aww, too late. Well, I'll go anyway, hehe... Captain Pep, logging out... love and

s to all of you
