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Artists to check out
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Best friends
:iconaislin-sedai::iconaleid::iconkakashicatastrophe::iconbrokenaingeal::iconkrijt::iconmajesticrhapsody::iconmorandysil::iconshiaine::icononkruidje:

Club
:iconguitar-art-asylum:

Top-3 secrets

Shoutbox

*pepineros:iconpepineros:
:hug:
Sat Jun 28, 2008, 11:45 PM
~Aleid:iconAleid:
Ok :) I'll stop. :) (yes this'll be the last one ;))
Wed Jun 18, 2008, 2:52 AM
*pepineros:iconpepineros:
aleid, two words. Go away. >__< my poor little shoutbox. *huggles it*
Fri Jun 13, 2008, 2:32 AM
~Aleid:iconAleid:
lalala! Het is al weer lang geleden.. xD
Thu Jun 12, 2008, 2:35 AM
~Aleid:iconAleid:
taha, ik zei: zit er een maximum aan, en daar werd het afgekapt xD Nou ja. xD
Sun May 25, 2008, 5:16 AM
~Aleid:iconAleid:
Dit begint inmiddels best grappig te worden =D waarom lees je dit niet? of lees je het wel, maar reageer je niet? xD Nah, ik denk het eerste, want zoveel gespam daar zou je wel een opmerking over maken xD Woooow wat kan een shout eigenlijk lang zijn.. zit
Sun May 25, 2008, 5:15 AM
~Aleid:iconAleid:
I just realised you should resize your ID, in my opinion. xD
Sat May 17, 2008, 5:46 AM
~Aleid:iconAleid:
you don't even shout back :O xD
Thu Apr 24, 2008, 9:11 AM
~Aleid:iconAleid:
muhahaha. *feels like a big mean spammer*
Sun Apr 20, 2008, 11:20 AM
~Aleid:iconAleid:
nouuuu zeg :O xD
Sun Apr 20, 2008, 11:07 AM
~Aleid:iconAleid:
*grom*
Sun Apr 20, 2008, 3:41 AM
~Aleid:iconAleid:
lalalaa xD :hug:
Sat Apr 19, 2008, 8:30 AM
~Aleid:iconAleid:
I think I'm scaring you by now. xD
Thu Apr 17, 2008, 6:20 AM
~Aleid:iconAleid:
you've like never been this inactive on dA for as long as I remember. xD
Wed Apr 16, 2008, 12:35 PM
~Aleid:iconAleid:
:hug:
Sat Apr 12, 2008, 3:00 AM
~Aleid:iconAleid:
*stalk*
Sat Apr 12, 2008, 3:00 AM
~Aleid:iconAleid:
hooi. =3
Sat Apr 12, 2008, 2:59 AM
~Aleid:iconAleid:
tsssk, waarom sluipen? (ok, dat snap ik eigenlijk wel, maargoed.) *HEEL HARD AAN KOMT STAMPEN* :glomp:
Wed Apr 9, 2008, 4:03 AM
~Aleid:iconAleid:
:glomp:
Mon Apr 7, 2008, 3:44 AM
*pepineros:iconpepineros:
thanks, everybody :) :hug:
Tue Mar 25, 2008, 4:04 AM

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...and one month later

Journal Entry: Fri May 23, 2008, 8:20 AM
  • Mood: Longing
  • Listening to: Supersub - I can't remember
  • Playing: guitar
  • Drinking: water
Update
Hi all!
As some of you might have noticed, I haven't been on dA for over a month. Now there's not too much to tell about that month, but I thought I'd let you all know I'm back. There are over two hundred deviations waiting for me - that might not sound horribly much, but firstly I tend to comment on every deviation I see, and secondly there are two rather big stories among those (Purity by *alterrnativeWRITING and Elery by ~meredith-de-monstre ) which I just have to read. Not really because I promised to do so, but because I think they're very good writers ^^ and I love them. Still, it's gonna take a lot of time.
In that regard, I don't really have a lot of spare time. English will need a little extra energy, as I really want to finish that before the summer holidays and I still need to do two cases and redo a previous one. My intern company is very nice but also very busy, which means I'll have to write both the half-time paper and any other school assignments at home - I don't have time to do that at work. Also, I've taken up learning html and css again, which is taking up a lot of my spare time but is also immense amounts of fun.
So yeah.., summing up, I can say life is looking good :) except love-wise, that is. That part is not necessarily bad, it's just very uneventful at the moment. But I trust that to change some time in the not-too-far-ahead future :aww:
From now 'till september
...that's one weird title. But anyways; I'd like to list all the nice and fun things I'll be doing this spring/summer. You can ignore it, it's just a little list for me to remind myself what a lucky bastard I am.
Prom, tomorrow evening.
Funfair, sunday may 25. Should be fun.
Pancake-eating with three girls, sadly they're all taken =P but it sounds good to say it like that. Friday may 30. (Oh and they're all on dA, and likely all going to reply to this journal even. Don't hit meh!)
Keltfest, sunday june 1. This is gonna be so much fun! And I'm gonna get Omnia's autographs on my guitar! :D (or well, that's the plan.)
Vacation with friends, july 6-11. Those are gonna be some of the best days of my life, I predict. :aww:
Sailing, july 13-26. Earning money doing something I love. Yay.
Castlefest, august 1-3. Pretty self-explanatiory.
Sailing, august 10-16. One more week of earning money doing something I love.
...bloody hell, I am a lucky bastard. Thank you all for paying attention to yet another completely self-centered journal; I'm hoping to write something interesting soon. Lots of love and :hug:s to you all :)
Art status:
At the moment I'm trying yet another fantasy-based story. The start looks promising, but so did the starts of every single fantasy story I started before. Meanwhile I'm churning out Dialogue-s (parts one and two are done) and keep enjoying myself playing the guitar - sadly dA will see nothing of this because of their no-music policy.


Homophobia is gay

Journal Entry: Fri May 23, 2008, 8:06 AM
  • Mood: Emotional
  • Playing: Music

All against homophobia
I found this piece in this journal by ~GreenDayRocker2323, who copied it from somewhere else.., doesn't really matter I think. Reading this hurt a little.

- - - - - - - - - - - -

I am the girl kicked out of her home because I confided in my mother that I am a lesbian.

I am the prostitute working the streets because nobody will hire a transsexual woman.

I am the sister who holds her gay brother tight through the painful, tear-filled nights.

We are the parents who buried our daughter long before her time.

I am the man who died alone in the hospital because they would not let my partner of twenty-seven years into the room.

I am the foster child who wakes up with nightmares of being taken away from the two fathers who are the only loving family I have ever had. I wish they could adopt me.

I am one of the lucky ones, I guess. I survived the attack that left me in a coma for three weeks, and in another year I will probably be able to walk again.

I am not one of the lucky ones. I killed myself just weeks before graduating high school. It was simply too much to bear.

We are the couple who had the Realtor hang up on us when she found out we wanted to rent a one-bedroom for two men.

I am the person who never knows which bathroom I should use if I want to avoid getting the management called on me.

I am the mother who is not allowed to even visit the children I bore, nursed, and raised. The court says I am an unfit mother because I now live with another woman.

I am the domestic-violence survivor who found the support system grow suddenly cold and distant when they found out my abusive partner is also a woman.

I am the domestic-violence survivor who has no support system to turn to because I am male.

I am the father who has never hugged his son because I grew up afraid to show affection to other men.

I am the home-economics teacher who always wanted to teach gym until someone told me that only lesbians do that.

I am the man who died when the paramedics stopped treating me as soon as they realized I was transsexual.

I am the person who feels guilty because I think I could be a much better person if I did not have to always deal with society hating me.

I am the man who stopped attending church, not because I don't believe, but because they closed their doors to my kind.

I am the person who has to hide what this world needs most, love.

I am the person who is afraid of telling his loving Christian parents he loves another male.
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Re-post this if you believe homophobia is wrong.





US Copyright law in turmoil

Journal Entry: Sun Apr 13, 2008, 12:28 AM
  • Mood: Artistic
  • Reading: Articles
  • Eating: stuff
  • Drinking: water

Artists losing rights to their work?
The Orphan Works bill
As you might have picked up somewhere on dA already, the US congress is looking to pass a bill that states you no longer have rights to your work. As it is now, copyright is automatic: if you create a work of art, any work of art, it's automatically copyrighted to you and nobody can do anything with it without your permission. Word has been spread however, the Orphan Works bill makes sure that as soon as you create something, it's no longer yours. Anyone can take it and do with it whatever they want, legally.
Is it really that bad?
Honestly: no, it's not. It's quite logical there's a lot of panic-talk all over dA (deviantART, after all, wouldn't have reason to exist without art on it) but looking at several official sites of the US it doesn't seem as dark as it sounds. Taken from www.asmp.org, the American Society of Media Photographers (direct link: http://www.asmp.org/news/spec2008/orphan_update.php):
"In terms of drafting, we are proposing to limit the scope of the Orphan Works defense to:
1. Uses by individuals for non-revenue producing personal or community purposes, including uses on websites that do not generate revenues for the individuals using the Orphan Works;
2. Uses in works of non-fiction, such as books, articles or documentary films or videos;
3. Uses by non-profit educational institutions, libraries, museums or archives qualified for treatment under ¤501(c)(3) of the Internal Revenue Code as amended
* in exhibits, including website displays, and
* for uses that produce revenues and that are ancillary to exhibits.
In a nutshell, we see little financial harm to creators from the non-profit and non-fiction uses of orphaned images. At the same time, we want to make sure that commercial users of images and illustrations would not be able to use an Orphan Works defense as a free pass to profit from infringements."

Although the ASMP is focused on photography, there's no reason to assume there will be seperate law for visual and any other form of art.
Also, there is this Notice of inquiry from the Copyright office of the Library of Congress. In short, it says:
"The Copyright Office seeks to examine the issues raised by “orphan works,” i.e., copyrighted works whose owners are difficult or even impossible to locate." and "Concerns have been raised, however, as to whether current copyright law imposes inappropriate burdens on users, including subsequent creators, of works for which the copyright owner cannot be located (hereinafter referred to as “orphan”' works). The issue is whether orphan works are being needlessly removed from public access and their dissemination inhibited. If no one claims the copyright in a work, it appears likely that the public benefit of having access to the work would outweigh whatever copyright interest there might be. Such concerns were raised in connection with the adoption of the life plus 50 copyright term with the 1976 Act and the 20-year term extension enacted with the Sonny Bono Copyright Term Extension Act of 1998."
Reading this, I think we're going to be okay. I'm quite sure there will be a lot of hassle before the bill has actually passed the Congress, as there have been quite a few of these (first came up in 2006 and was 'shot down' quite early).
How this affects "us"
As you can see, if the congress is going to act as they state they will in this article (and we have no reason to believe they will *not* do so) people on dA are going to be fine. If you have a work of art on dA, and nowhere else, and any American browses dA and finds your piece of art nice enough to steal, there is your name right at the top of the page telling him it's yours. There's absolutely no way he will get away with claiming "s/he conducted a reasonably diligent search and didn't find the copyright holder". So all I'm trying to say is, don't get all panic-stricken because of a bill that might not even pass Congress; and don't believe everything that's written about it on dA. This of course means you shouldn't believe my journal entry either; so instead I'll just give you links to official places where the definition of an "Orphaned Work" is explained and how the Orphan Works bill is going to affect that. Here we go.
The official website on US copyrights and The article on this website I quoted
A testimony on Orphan Works and the Orphan Works bill on the same website
News on the ASMP (American Society of Media Photographers) website, including a definition of an Orphaned Work
I hope this has been useful; again, don't panic. Even if the bill does pass Congress, it won't be like "Americans can take whatever they want from the web and use and/or sell it", it won't be like "Big Bad American Business takes our stuff to make money with it", but maybe it'll result into less protection for artists' works. That's bad enough already, from the artists' points of view, but well... while there are still not as many artists as there are non-artists (and this is especially true for members of Congress and Reps.) it's gonna be incredibly hard to stop passing of this bill by voting against it. That's called 'democracy', I believe.
Thanks for paying attention; love and :hug:s to all :)



The birth of a band

Journal Entry: Sat Apr 5, 2008, 10:35 PM
  • Mood: Pride
  • Listening to: myself
  • Playing: tunes
  • Eating: breakfast

Music, still
The first title I thought of was, "The erection of a band". It was only after I thought of this title, I realized actually how easy it would be for... certain people, to take that out of contest. Mainly of course as the band in question is (at the moment) a one-man band, and that one man is me. This information exists solely to inform all of you that my dirty mind is still there. (And I just love the alliteration in the current title :aww:)
A new band
So yeah. The bullet is through the church. (Now feast your minds on that, you non-dutch watchers!) I'm starting, or have started, a band, called March; please allow me to tell you people something about it.
Funny thing is, I can't even tell you that much about the music it'll be making. I can tell you what instruments are in it, I can tell you what the main influences are, but I honestly can't name the genre it fits in best; so I'll indeed just do that, tell you what it *is*, then you can decide whether or not it's likable. March, at the moment, consists of acoustic guitar (me), percussion instruments (which is to say, 'the back of the guitar body', also me) and tin whistle (me). Main influences are Omnia (neo-celtic, I think), Blackmore's Night (medieval/traditional), but on the other hand both those bands are quite orientated around vocals, which March - wanting a good vocalist - is not, or not yet. Also it's influenced by pop (Great Big Sea, anyone?) and certain metal styles (HammerFall's slower guitar riffs and Blind Guardian's feeling for both rythm and their fantasy setting). So, I think you'll agree, it's hard to label.
Something about the name: March. Of course it's a month, and my favourite month too (my birthday is in it, for example), and it sounds good to me, short but strong. Not a lot to tell about it besides this. A downside is, there already *is* a band called March. Luckily for me they're from California USA and are not well-known or anything, so there's not too much chance they'll charge me for stealing their name. To those who're interested: they don't have their own website but their myspace profile can be found here: March on myspace. I don't have a Myspace profile yet, as I'm having *lots* of trouble with the technical side of things on there. I do, however, have profiles on Purevolume (go to www.purevolume.com/marchofficial ) and Imeem (go to profile.imeem.com/9h_f3iz), plus my own website, which you can find at www.marchofficial.com, though that one's still under construction; I'm not that much of a webbuilder.
On all three of these sites you can listen to the first song I recorded, a two-guitar version of the traditional (and well-known) song Greensleeves. As it's a two-guitar arrangement I'm gonna need at least one other person to play it live, but that's the future for now. If you like the song, please sign up and leave me a comment! Whether on Imeem or Purevolume doesn't matter, though signing up to Purevolume is faster by a little, plus at Purevolume you can add me to your favourites. This will make sure you're on my Purevolume page under the 'Fans' header, and you'll get notified when I upload new music. (Both would be even sweeter.) You can also download the file from Purevolume (click the "download" button next to the song you want) on my profile. Of course, all the music I'll be creating in the future will be put on those sites as well so if you liked Greensleeves, it's probably you'd like other music from me as well so it's not a bad idea to sign up anyways. I'll love you for every comment.
If you'd like the mp3 file of the song but - for whatever reason - can't download it from my Purevolume page, send me an e-mail at march.official@gmail.com stating you'd like the mp3 of Greensleeves and I'll send it to you. This goes for everybody, you don't have to know me (or I you), we don't have to be friends, if you like the music just contact me and thou shalt receive, so to speak. I'll make the song available for download on my site as well but like I said, I'm not that much of a webbuilder so it might again take a little time.
My life, and stuff
Well, so much for advertising. For those who are interested, life's been good to me since I posted the last journal. Actually it's been being good to me for very long now, I don't really have anything to complain about. That's very frustrating, you know? (Aah, and now I'm complaining. I'm sorry.) School is going well, I passed an important test the other day while expecting to fail, which wasn't bad AT ALL; internship is almost done, which isn't bad. Love-wise things are still quite boring around here but I'm sure that'll get more lively some time in the future; and for now it's just very nice to have a lot of time to myself, recording and coding and more recording.
Well, so much for my interesting life. Please do me a favour and leave a comment on my Purevolume page or my Imeem page, I'll love you for ever. :hug: and all the best to you!
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Jetzt sind wir da
wo keiner von uns war
Rastlos waren wir
die Jahre hängen uns noch lange nach

Alles, was wir haben, das sind wir
worauf wir warten, das ist hier
Siehst du die Zeichen,
Liebe und Zorn
Alles was bleibt
ist eine Flucht nach vorn

Wir zogen zu weit aus
dein Herz bricht alle Schranken
Was uns jetzt noch führt
ist der Abgrund, den wir fanden

Alles, was wir haben, das sind wir
worauf wir warten, das ist hier
Siehst du die Zeichen,
Liebe und Zorn
Alles was bleibt
ist eine Flucht nach vorn

Jetzt sind wir da
wo keiner von uns war
(Alles was bleibt
ist eine Flucht nach vorn)

Rastlos waren wir
die Jahre, hängen uns noch lange nach
(Alles was bleibt
ist eine Flucht nach vorn)

Die Wege werden steil
doch wir sehen immer mehr
(Alles was bleibt
ist eine Flucht nach Vorn)

Schatten wachsen uns
das Licht scheint zu uns her
(Alles was bleibt
ist eine Flucht nach vorn)


Weather's strange

Journal Entry: Fri Mar 28, 2008, 9:19 AM
  • Mood: Pity
  • Listening to: myself
  • Playing: nothing
  • Eating: breakfast

The weather's strange
Please note: I tried to save them by supplying valid reasons but there's no helping the matter. Notwithstanding my music flash files load the music file externally and as such do not use up dA's server space, and despite the fact that the music I post is not protected by copyright, the dA admin I talked to about this was clear. Musical files are not allowed on dA, so from now on you won't be finding any of those on my pages. Thanks for understanding.
About Dutch weather
It occured to me that 2008 is the third year in a row we ('we' here meaning 'the dutch people', the dutch people here meaning 'everybody who lives in the Netherlands' ) get snow, and quite a lot of it, in march. Now the 21st of march is supposed to mark the start of spring, and is also the spring equinox (meaning both day and night are exactly twelve hours long). Although last two years the snow fell early in march, usually in holland we only got snow in december and january, if I remember correctly. Also, there's always a *lot* of snow (the first year it fell we couldn't even get to school, nor could most teachers, as there was so much snow on the road), which is even more remarkable. I don't know how it's possible and because of that it scares me, but that doesn't mean I don't like it as well of course! Snow's good.
Dunno why, I just wanted to tell some people about it. Of course most dutch people already know =P so I guess I wanted to tell all non-dutch people how weirdly our weather is acting. Just so you know.
Money and music
Weird title for a piece of journal text, I know. Let me explain.
Because of a clever combination of effects including 1. the taxes, 2. the dutch group that pays for studying, and 3. my *mother*, my monthly income has been roughly cut in half. I'll spare you the details (except if you're absolutely chafing for details, then I might share some) but you will understand it's not something I welcome. I will get the money I'm entitled to, eventually, but it's gonna take at least another three months. This means, contrary to what I said in my previous journal, I will not be able to get any new equipment anytime soon. I don't like having a debt anywhere so you'll understand I won't be asking anybody for money, but this means I'll have to save on whatever I can (including music, obviously, as it's rather expensive) to keep this up. Another bad thing is I'll leave my current (paying) intern company in three weeks for a new one, the boss of which is planning to pay me at the end of the internship (which would be ten weeks after the start of the next school year) based on how well I did. So I won't have any help from there either.
On the plus side, when I *do* get my money, it's going to be an unimaginable amount of it. Not literally unimaginable: it would be around €1800 but that's very much for a poor student like me. This also means that when I get this money, I will be able to afford lots of new equipment at once; which would be greater than great. I don't think you people will be seeing any new stuff of mine (music-wise) around dA, considering they've been removing music for some time now, but I'll post links to free hosts where I stored the music so you'll be able to listen no matter what :) if you like, of course.
That's all from me for now; thought I'd give you an update on why I'm not, well, updating. :hug:s to all!
Rhyme and reason, reason and rhyme
we asked the old man, what is the time
The time, he said, I do not know
the clock stopped working some time ago
What a disaster, was our reply
we don't know if it's one o'clock or half past five
The man kept talking things were fine
looking at the sun he said the time was for reason and rhyming

Reason and rhyme, rhyme and reason
we asked the old lady, what is the season
The season she said you can't be sure
the weather's strange, can't tell you any more
Oh my God, oh my God, oh my God what a thing
we don't know if it's summer, autumn, winter or spring
But wait, she said, this might be pleasing
the time has come for rhyming and rhyming and reason

Rhyme and reason, and destination
we ask ourselves, what is this nation
This nation they say is no man's land
and 'Terra Nullius' is written in the sand
So what, with all these spaces
can't we be independent and combine the races
Well we will see what we can do
like time and season we'll rhyme and then we'll reason along



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Tagged

Journal Entry: Tue Mar 18, 2008, 11:30 PM
  • Mood: Nervous
  • Listening to: myself
  • Playing: nothing
  • Eating: breakfast

Tagged-ness

I was tagged by =forbiddenhero, even though he's working hard to make a deadline, he has enough time for this kind of randomness.
Tag rules
So, here's how tag works.
1.Post these rules.
2.Each tagged person must post 8 things about themselves on their journal.
3.At the end,you have to choose and tag 8 people and post their icons on the same journal.
4.Go to their pages and send a message saying you tagged them.
5.No tag-backs!

1. I love my guitar more than some people I know.

2. When I'm bicycling from home to school or work or wherever, I usually sing. Usually I don't have my mp3-player with me.

3. Waiters still ask me for my ID when I order a beer, or some other light-alcoholic drink for which the age limit is 16+. I turned 19 last week.

4. I miss my friends, as they're all not on my school and some just live too far away.

5. I don't like to draw and I'm not good at it, but I love commenting and criticizing other people's drawings.

6. I love horsebackriding and ballroom dancing; I'm a heterosexual guy.

7. Actually I'm not 100% sure about the last part of number 6.

8. All of my best friends are girls.

That was fun ^^ I think people should do this kind of stuff more often.

People I tag...

:iconmeredith-de-monstre::iconnijntje-pien::iconlurbeflummel::iconalannavich::iconnillsha::iconaleid::iconshiaine::iconkakashicatastrophe:

Now don't cheat, just do this tag-thingie :) and again, no back-tags! Sure you all know eight people apart from me =P

:iconaleid::iconshiaine::iconkris-wilson::iconlurbeflummel::iconmeredith-de-monstre:

:iconaislin-sedai::iconaleid::iconkakashicatastrophe::iconbrokenaingeal::iconkrijt::iconmajesticrhapsody::iconmorandysil::iconshiaine::icononkruidje:

:iconmoongekko:






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Contest winners & more

Journal Entry: Sun Mar 16, 2008, 11:49 AM
  • Mood: Lazy
  • Listening to: myself
  • Watching: a microphone plug
  • Playing: tunes

Contest: write-a-songtext WINNERS
No. 1: ~LurbeFlummel
Ismail entered the piece I wish he hadn't died and hits first place! There's a lot I like about this. Firstly the subject: a funeral isn't a usual subject for a song, but for me it worked brilliantly. The sorrow and pain which 'should' accompany being at a funeral, it's all translated from emotion to words very accurately. Another very strong point of this song is the lack of repeat. Only the line, "I went to a wake the other day" keeps returning but what the main character witnesses at the wake is different every time. The verses are equally lengthened, which is good as it helps to maintain coherency. The rythm is a subject to a lot of diversity at times which makes it harder again to maintain coherency but that's not very much of a problem... it's a very good song indeed. Congratulations! I'll be activating your three months subscription soon :)
No. 2: *Aleid
Aleid entered the piece Some love isn't enough and hits a respectable second place. The funny thing is it's quite different from ~LurbeFlummel's entry: there's a lot of repeats (whereas I wish he hadn't died has very few) and the subject is immensely cliché (while I wish he hadn't died stands out for originality); it's not necessarily a bad thing though. This is a very "easy" song (or at least it is for me), easy to give a 'musical frame', easy to listen, but because of this it could get boring after listening to it a few times.
(One small part I'd like to highlight in this songtext: "Though I just can't stop/loving you is insecure", makes brilliant use of a single phrase "loving you" while actually meaning 'Though I just can't stop loving you, loving you is insecure'. Very well done.)
The rest
~Korgone entered the piece mr. Nobody. It's one very unique and interesting song (or as he puts it himself, "more like a musical piece") but the rythm is incoherent and the piece is quite chaotic, overall. It's refreshing and particularly original but the lack of consistency is too much of a bad thing in my opinion.
~Alannavich entered the piece Good Time Memories, arguably the best poem I received from contesting members. The main reason why this piece is not first place is simple: it's not enough of a song. So despite the fact it's a very good poem, I can't relate it to any rythm or any tune. Also there's no real song outline (for example verse 1 - chorus - verse 2 - bridge - chorus) which is almost a necessity for any song. The subject is fine, the writing is very good, but a song... no.
Funnily, ~BrandendBoomschors's entry Superskunk is exactly the opposite from Alanna's entry in terms of both quality of writing and songishness (no I didn't make that up =P ). Looking at the writing, it's simple - not to say boring - and quite short. Looking at the consistency of rythm and rhyming pattern, it's very good: one can immediately relate the words to a rythm. However, another worse point of this entry is the subject: for those who don't know, superskunk is a popular word for weed. Like pointed out in the contest description, all facets of a songtext - including the subject - are important.
~Wesselus entered the piece A song about you which is not only his first song but also his first ever piece here on dA. There are some issues concerning English and rythm, but for example the choice of words is very good for such an inexperienced writer. So, talented? Definitely. (I'm thinking it runs in the family.) Experienced? Not so much. Keep practicing!

I actually very much enjoyed running this contest. It was small-scale but it was a succes, at least in my book: though there weren't very many contestants, the entries were *very* diverse and indeed quite equally leveled. It was very hard for me to decide the winner. I'd love to hear what you, the contestants, thought and think about it :) help me with any feedback on how to improve future contest runs! I'll love you for it!
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Me & my highly interesting life
Birthday
As some of you might know it's my birthday today! Yesterday night was Spring Ball, which lasted till after 12 so I actually turned 19 in a city theatre with over 1500 people in it. (I think they weren't ALL there for me...) It was pretty cool, some (not-so-funny) friends of mine starting singing "happy birthday" during a music break hoping to have everybody sing along; luckily for me, they failed =P
Today my parents and little brothers came over to my place to congratulate and bring some gifts (well, only one actually =P ). I think I did a pretty good job cleaning my room: seeing as they didn't faint from the smell. I'm off cleaning up again after I post this (that's the downside of inviting people: they make a mess, then go home) but that's okay, I'm actually starting to like cleaning. Probably from doing it so often.
Anything else.., I'm quite happy I'll be gone from my current job in four weeks, the people are nice but the work is *so* boring. I have a chat with my soon-to-be employer next friday during which she'll explain what my task(s) will be there. If it sounds as bad as my current job, I'm gonna go look for another. I might seem a little overreacting but what I got now really sucks, I spend time doing schoolwork or on dA because there's just so little for me to do, then they get mad at me for not doing anything. Well...
Music
I was planning to have a new piece of recording equipment up today but I changed my mind (happens a lot, yes). I've been playing my acoustic a lot lately and I think it sounds a lot better than the semi-acoustic, especially when playing classical pieces. I fitted new strings as well last week, which of course improved sound a lot. So, once again: re-recording, but still using a mic. I *might* get the USB hub I was talking about (with which I'd be able to connect my semi-acoustic with my laptop directly, cancelling the background static I get from microphone recording) but definitely not anytime soon. I still think the recordings will be better, plus recording is fun. I'll get edits of my current pieces Andante, Cantilene Espagno and Romance very soon, maybe tonight even, and make proper deviations out of them; I think the new strings deserve it. I'll upload two pieces of my own the two sundays after today, after that I'm not yet sure. Maybe I'll have more pieces of my own, maybe I'll record some existing songs; we'll have to see.
Stuff
First and foremost, can I please have your attention for my friend Tjerk ( ~krijt ), who's currently in hospital recovering from a heavy medical operation. As far as I know the operation itself went as planned, his family and girlfriend are with him, but if you've spent time in hospital yourself you know it's never nice to be there. So, if you have some love to spare, send it :) or be a little more concrete, go to his page and leave a nice message for him to read as soon as he returns home. Thanks :aww:

Right now I'm quickly getting intoxicated with chocolate (I love Easter) so I'll be off before I start saying weird things... aww, too late. Well, I'll go anyway, hehe... Captain Pep, logging out... love and :hug:s to all of you :)
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